Monday 8 September 2014

Change Over

Trapped inside a body that isn't mine, about to be killed by a fate that belongs to another short brown hair whips around my face it should be yellowy gold, long and thick but this is my fate to be placed into a dying body that isn't mine to feel their pain hear their wishes but unable to do anything to be a prisoner, to be deaths guest not just once but a million times. what's the worst pain you've ever felt? because i can bet that by miles,huge miles. Loud  screams exit  her mouth getting closer to death falling, falling. 
LANDING . ENDING

6 comments:

  1. THIS IS AWESOME! THIS IS AWESOME! THIS IS AWESOME!

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  2. THIS IS DUMB BOO. JOKING HAHA

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  3. The author used great figurative language in this story. Scary, at times, but it appears that was the author's intention. Great job in capitalizing ending words, puts great emphasis in the story.

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